Saturday, 9 February 2008

FAIRY TALE by Iñigo I.(DBH 2)

Once upon a time, in a land of the north where the days were short and the nights were long, there lived a king who would listen to no-one but his counsellor. The king had no children, and his wife had died long ago. The king was kind, and thought that the counsellor was a good man, for he thought that everyone was good. But the counsellor was really a wicked man, and planned to become the king himself.

One day, the king called the counsellor to him. ‘Wisest counsellor’ he began. ‘There is something I must tell you. It is not true that I have no children. Many years ago, we had a beautiful daughter. But when she was a baby, she was cruelly stolen from us, and we have never seen her again. Soon I will die, and she must be queen. You must find her for me. Find her now!’

The next day, the counsellor began to look for the beautiful daughter but he was only pretending. He knew where she was, she was in a very far cave from the castle. Two days later, the counsellor arrived at the cave and he killed the daughter.

The counsellor called the king to say that he found her in one cave dead, and the king replied that he was going to send some soldiers to look for clues.

Minutes later the soldiers arrived at that cave and they started following his steps.When they finished they decided that the murderer was the counsellor. One day later when the soldiers arrived at the castle they said to the king that the killer was the counsellor, and the king decided to arrest the counsellor and, the soldiers arrested him.

Two years later the king died, and then the soldiers decided who was going to be the next king, and after two days the next king was the captain of the soldiers.

3 comments:

  1. Hi, Iñigo. I think that this idea of fairy tale soldiers investigating the clues as in CSI is very original. Thank you for your story.

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  2. hi IÑIGO, your story is very good becaus of the clues and you are a good boy.


    mxxxxxxmmxxx

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  3. your story is very interesting !
    congratulations !
    bye bye

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