Thursday, 21 February 2008

HORROR STORY by Miguel C. (DBH2)

He had heard that the mountain was haunted, but he didn’t care. That summer night, the moon was full as he knocked the last peg into the ropes that secured his small, one-man tent. He was up there alone, on the summit of Ben McDhui, an isolated peak in the Cairngorm Mountains of Scotland. He enjoyed being alone. He could think about things, make plans, relax.

Then suddenly he heard the noise. At first he thought it might be another mountaineer, another loner, up there on the summit like him. But then when he heard the noise again, he realised that he was mistaken. No man could produce the noise that he had just heard…

The man opened the tent and he saw a woman with a knife in the back, the woman was shrieking. The woman asked him to help, the man didn’t help her because he was cowardly, and he took the tent and he went away.

One day the man was in his house and the woman knocked at the door and the woman said “help me, help me!!!”, and the man replied “no, go away!!” and he slammed the door. The man cowardly took the car and he went away.

The man was on the highway and the woman appeared on the highway saying “help me, help me” and when the man entered a bend he had an accident and he died.

4 comments:

  1. Hi, Miguel. I really liked your story. After reading it, I think I should help everybody (no matter what appearance they have). Just in case...

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  2. miguel your story was very good and you are a very good boy.
    good by miguel.

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  3. Miguel your story was fantastic. I like it very much because of the idea you had.

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  4. Hi Miguel.
    Congratulations for the story.
    We liked very much.
    Bye Bye

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